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meltedhappiness 4/28/12 . chapter 9
Yay! I just reviewed the last chapter and loved it, but this was a refreshing change as well.

Although I personally didn't want Belle to leave escorting, I know that many fans did. I saw Belle/Hannah as a prostitute for as long as she could and maybe it even scared her that she loved it more than any man.

But, this chapter made her seem different, but still in character. Brilliant:)
meltedhappiness 4/28/12 . chapter 8
You are amazing.

I was missing the show so much and this completely brought it back for me. I'm not going to say that the writing was exquisite and beautiful, but it was completely 100% fitting. The bluntness, the sex, Hannah, Belle, Ben, Bambi, Byron, Harry, and everyone else.

The way you kept breaking the fourth wall even though I was reading and not watching. It was like I watching. This should be scripted and made into a season, except I feel like the raping would be too brutal for the show, but I would love to see this made. This was just amazing and during the show, I had also thought Harry to be a little bit psychopathic.

Once he raped her, I actually shouted, "I knew it! I knew he was a rapist!"

Thankfully, my family didn't hear:) I also greatly enjoyed how this story was so closely formatted to the show.

But, this totally brought the show back for me and I can't understand how great it is. Thank you for a lovely read! And I just realized that there is an Alternate Ending Chapter left, so I must go read that!
Crazychicke 3/26/12 . chapter 9
lol 'gwen had buggered off' - love this!

ben/hannah shippers will be happy, i guess i can't complain.. overall what an amzing fic,youdid such a good job. You've seriously lured me into this fandom. Now I want to write fanfics for this lot. Really enjoyed your fic, thanks for writing it.
Crazychicke 3/26/12 . chapter 7
i loved the first sentence, hehe. the last scene was brilliantly written. i never really liked harry he was always a bit creepy for me. I loved Alex and Duncan (although he turned out to be an ass - still devastated). After S1, Ben/Hannah just didn't work for me, i still loved their friendship, but I never liked them as a couple. Wierd i know. Also loving Bambi. Bambi/Hannah's friendship is really beautiful. well done.
Crazychicke 3/26/12 . chapter 6
holy crap! Harry is freaky! lol

i love hannah/belle. really interesting concept.
Crazychicke 3/26/12 . chapter 5
I'm really enjoying this so far, love how you've structured it and you're spot on with hannah/belle's the humour as well. keep it up.
Crazychicke 3/26/12 . chapter 1
Just watched the first three seasons.. absolutely love it! your story captures her so well. I can't believe there's hardly any of stories, I might have to write some! lol well done, look forward to reading more.
JartFan-1011 3/15/12 . chapter 9
awww i yelped at the bit where he asks her to marry him: i like this ending a lot but this ending seems like hannah the previous one seems like belle

so glad you did two endings! x
JartFan-1011 3/15/12 . chapter 8
why do you keep calling him harry smith and then harry keegan?

it may sound twisted and weird but i don't care even after what the unbelievably cute harry did i still awwwed at him talking in prison and BEN getting married so cute! x
JartFan-1011 3/15/12 . chapter 7
fuck! harry is not like that and ur just repeating the storyline from seasson 3! how could you ruin harry's cuteness and desirability by making him a rapist OMG: i am so unhappy now! x
JartFan-1011 3/15/12 . chapter 6
sorry i haven't reviewed the past couple of chapters too involved in the story: poor ash: i cried when i read about his funeral god what is gunna happen with harry? omg? x
JartFan-1011 3/14/12 . chapter 3
don't judge me - i have watched the show for so long nothing surprises me and i love belle she amazing

love her and charlotte's relationship and see how it has developed over time

awww benny benny benny is sooo unbelieveably sweet, kind and generous the fact that he is also sooo unbelieveably cute helps as well

omg what made you think of that? as what a cilent wanted i am surprised - how the fuck did u write this bit oh my god

ahhh ashok

looking forward to the next chapter - but sadly i will have to wait until tommorow : great story: if you read this review: please write another SD fanfic they are really great i no i haven't finished this one yet. but one with alex in would be amzing and i think you would do it justice x
JartFan-1011 3/14/12 . chapter 2
harry feels the same way about belle as belle feels about ben (and who could resist harry's advances god he is so wow) and no belle don't you dare think about becoming a madam - what your doing now isn't illegal but that is!

harry would never call bell a whore - how could u write that he would say that - ok she is - but that is why everybody loves her oh god what is harry gunna do - he really should no better he is a cop after all! x
JartFan-1011 3/14/12 . chapter 1
omg i love this! it is only one og like 2 stories and the first i read! it is great you got harry's character perfect and ben's too. i no you wrote this ages ago and probably don't care now but there are a few minor errors with things belle says: for example, "I hadn't been able to orgasm" season one she clearly states she never orgasms with a cilent and you mentioned naomi - she stated then she isn't a girl's girl but will go gay for pay. i can't remember the other one. love the reference to alex and bryon - why are all the men in this programme (main characters) so totally gorgeous - sorry for the massive review you will be getting another 8 of these x
Sazzy 12/12/11 . chapter 9
Brilliant story, you captured her character so well :)
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