|Reviews for Transition|
| logincrash 4/12/13 . chapter 11
I loved it. Every chapter was amazing.
| Anon 4/5/13 . chapter 11
I read through this in two days and absolutely enjoyed it. I love these two to pieces and you portray them so wonderfully. And the ending is nicely wrapped up too. Thank you
| Wolvenkite 4/2/13 . chapter 11
You need to mark this story as complete.
| Avarenda 1/25/13 . chapter 11
Good story, although i always kinda wondered what would happen if Isabella's 'previous love' and Hawke were ever to meet.
| Rawkysand 1/25/13 . chapter 11
forgot my password... heh. but anyways t'was one of the best fanfic ive read for a long, long time. sad to see it come to an end as your portrayal of Isabela is definitely one of the best! hope to see similar in the future :)
| t8kmybreathaway 1/24/13 . chapter 11
It is extremely hard to hate a parent no matter how horrible their actions are you still love them, they are still your parents. Glad you finished, it was great.
| Velace 1/23/13 . chapter 1
It's true.. I wanted to romance her, but I didn't want to be all pushy.. at least up until the point she slept with my hawke.
| Ruaitae 1/8/13 . chapter 10
I love how you captured Isabela's personality. Thumbs up!
| wing-wings 12/27/12 . chapter 10
Holy Maker! An update, and a wonderful one at that! I loved the banter about sinking the ship - that felt so in character. Great update. :)
| leogrl19 12/17/12 . chapter 10
OHMAHGLOB - YOU'RE NOT DED.
Cereal, I can't tell you how happy I was to see this story up in the little queue blah! I'll just consider it my personal Christmas present, yes? ;)
So, knowing how much you LOVE the theme of 'Change', I immediately knew this chapter was going to be golden. I'll be honest: I absolutely *adored* the ship scene. There was something about the way you wrote Isabela in it...I can't explain it, besides it just being spot on. Just the right amount of *everything* pertaining to her reactions; I very much enjoyed the negotiation of it (and the christening as well).
But, throughout the entire chapter, I liked how 'Change' was addressed between varying subtle and overt hues through each scene, painting a very lovely portrait of where Isabela and Hawke are at the end - very nicely done. And, well worth the wait.
| Turkey in a suit 12/17/12 . chapter 10
Love it. Especially the ending.
| Fluval66 12/16/12 . chapter 10
I have greatly enjoyed reading your story and am sad to see it come to an end. Great ending, btw. I look forward to the epilogue.
| Anon 12/15/12 . chapter 10
I hope you'll write a jealous Isabela in the epilogue- you know it'll be cute.
| Guest 9/2/12 . chapter 9
Please continue! This is such an excellent story, too awesome to be left unfinished! Take all my money!
| Ily18 6/21/12 . chapter 9
God, you made me cry! A lot! Especially in the last two chapters!
Please, tell me you're going to complete this story! This couple unfortunately has very few story about them, and one talented writer as yourself can't leave this amazing story unfinished!