This was really good - hope you write more!

Wow, very well-written. It's always a nice treat to see a story on here with such strong prose and perfect construction. I hope that soon you'll consider writing more for the fandom, love. Good shit right here.

Really good for your first VM fic. Emotional, sad and complicated...but they still belong together!

Really good for your first VM fic. Emotional, sad and complicated...but they still belong together!

This was amazing for your first VM fic. I hope you'll write many more.

So sad and sweet and fucked up beyond all measure!

Very hot... and kinda sad or bittersweet at the same time. Veronica loves in control and Logan doesn't know whether she loves him like he loves her...