|Reviews for Dragon Ball AF: The Alpha Tour Saga|
| matt adams 5/9/13 . chapter 34
Yet another great chapter. Loved how you put out vegetas soft side and of course gokus comedy side. Vegeta showing emotion is something big to me. Rhe only time he has ever really showed emotion was when he blew himself up against majin buu. Your a great writer man, hope you get another chapter out just as quick as 35 so it can be done and oover with. I bet you can't wait for that.
| Aleaster 5/9/13 . chapter 35
I really like this story! Keep it up!
| Jason9000 5/6/13 . chapter 35
Figured that's why Alpha didn't want the sword near him.
| kimdc413 5/6/13 . chapter 35
Wow..u updated super fast, and produced an exciting chapter to boot! I was wondering about those flashbacks.. then I read in the authors notes you don't want to spoil anything, but I'm totally fine with a spoiler or two:) seriously what happened with gokus attack and trunks showing up with Hyperions sword**gasp** I was not expecting that! I also Loved the comical effect you threw in..it was so in character for those two! Can't wait for the big fight_
| Guest 5/1/13 . chapter 34
Read "Bringer of Death"
| Ermilus 5/2/13 . chapter 34
For a moment I thought it would be the same as to win bbe took over and goku had to fight him. Let's hope vegeta gets his body back and kick alpa's ass update and this is also going to my favorite
| Ermilus 5/2/13 . chapter 33
I was exited for the prospect of Goku facing alpa and not Vegeta! Is the same thing Babe did to Vegeta in GT ! So I'm disappointed
| Dark eyes 4/30/13 . chapter 34
You r one hell of a dbz writer ... why dont u do something about your writings by ... u know .. promoting it or something,getting reviewed and all ... yeah people might steal it, give some chapters for them to read...not all
| SwordofGeddon 4/30/13 . chapter 34
Hey JTX good to see you back with another great chapter. To be trapped, for eions like that losing everything including your own identity...that would be Hell in every sense of the word.
I found myself cheering every moment Vegeta gained the upper hand in that battle, all the while his theme "Hell's Bells" played in my mind.
You have true talent my friend.
| matt adams 4/28/13 . chapter 34
Anothet great chapter. Glad you didn't bring them quite out of that void yet. Cant wait for the next one.
| Reviewer12 4/28/13 . chapter 34
Your best chapter yet imo (along with the Goku is back in your previous story). I loved the inception-esque description of Vegeta, lost in his mind for eons! Hope to see the rest of your story, dont worry about updates, just fo it when you can :)
| Ali 4/28/13 . chapter 34
THAT WAS AWESOME
| Aleaster 4/28/13 . chapter 34
Ya! You're back! Good luck with your dissertation! What's the topic?
| kimdc413 4/28/13 . chapter 34
Well worth the wait! You always hit us with the element of surprise! followed by a dose of Awe! and topped off with that darn cliffhanger! This chapter had it all_
| jeff 4/26/13 . chapter 1
. Hey man, thats my email if you want to respond to me or my questions or tips or advice. Hope to hear from ya!