Nice exchange between them. There are many times I wished Bella could have just come out and made the sharable truth clear like this. But I'm also aware that sometimes it just doesn't happen. About important things, it's often not so easy as it looks. Sigh.

Thanks for writing! Nicely done. :)

Totally agree, that is probably exactly how it should have been handled! You did really well, guy!

This line: "Dad, Jacob played you like a two-dollar banjo."?

Brilliant. I woke Hubward up from cackling like a hyena, LOL. Well spoken, Bella. And too true - glad to see I'm not the only one that wondered what happened to my strong, fierce Bella from the first two books!

Sweet

Wow...how I wish this scence would of taken place!

Good one! I love me some back-bone Bella!

An excellent one shot, just the way i would have liked SM to write it. Thanks for correcting her error :)

Ahh, I would've liked Bella better if she stopped letting people walk over her. It gets annoying. Thank you for this again.

Wow so much more detail than in Eclipse. I really like your writing, I trully don't think your nuts. You did deserve a hit on the head. Your are really good. Are You going to write some more. I've almost read all you've written. Hope you do. MLD12

Hi Twihusband. I know you, though you don't know me :) I sometimes read what you write on Twitter. I'm not on Twitter (don't even know how the thing works) but I have found out you can read some stuff there. I read some of your Twitlongers a few days ago and they helped me. I'm a big fan of both 'kids' as you sweetly call them. I'm a silent fan you can say.
Btw, this is really good. I knew from the very first line, when Bella says a very clear NO. Wow, what a special Bella we have here. Determined. Knows what she wants. Says it. States it.
Enjoyed this, though it's short. Thank you. Not just for the story. For supporting 'the kids' the way you've been doing. I'm still so confused.

Very cool one-shot/missing scene...whatever. Just enjoyed it immensely. Favorite line? "I owe him my life, but I don't owe him the rest of that life.". Oh yeah.

I wish this is what happened...sigh

Loved it. Bella sure did need to grow a pair in the series. I think it would have been more interesting and better told with her being stronger and standing up for herself. Well written! :)

Thank god! Finally someone else who saw how much Jacob manipulated EVERYONE in Eclipse. That book and movie makes me sick. Great job. I loved this.

Bella needed to grow a pair throughout most of the Saga.

I've often thought that, after Edward dumped her in New Moon, and she "rediscovered" Jacob, she was keeping him as a backup in case Edward took off again.

Edward ran once, what was to keep him from finding some other reason to do it again? For her own good, of course. Cruel to be kind, for the greater good, yadda, yadda, yadda.

Bella may have been the caretaker of her parents, but I do think Stephenie Meyer captured the emotional immaturity of an inexperienced 17 year old girl. Girls do that kind of shit.