OMG this so totally works! I would love to see it expanded. Very well done and completely believable! They make such a right pair. Thanks for sharing.

I reallly love this little story, I think you did a marvelous job. You should make this a into a full story, I really think its a good pairing.

XXX,

Ella Michelle Smith

_ Awesomeness

this is perfect adorable, sarah james and sirius would be so perfect together, though it needs a little more like when hermione and harry meet sarah

Love their characteristics, they truly seem like they're made for eachother. :) My favourite line has to be the last one though! :D

Awwww This is absolutely adorable. Sarah Jane and Sirius would be so perfect together. Great one-shot!

I've been meaning and meaning and meaning to review this, but I always manage to get distracted by something. Usually you. With your cute cat gifs from Tumblr. But that's not your fault, it's mine. I should be more... determined?

So I really like this fic. And when I say really like, I mean, this is my new headcanon for both universes. It's too amazing. It is literally so amazing that I can barely wrap my head around it. I've been telling every Doctor Who fan I know about it and they all agree that it is wonderful and lovely and I am going to point them to this fic and demand that they love it like it deserves to be loved.

The story itself is well-written, but I've told you that and you're such a badass writer that you should know that your stuff is good by now. I just love every moment of it. Sarah Jane's obvious care for K-9, and K-9 protecting her when she starts to get scared. Sirius is delightfully halfway crazy, and his relationship and dynamic with Sarah Jane is beautiful and real and I just aldakjls. It makes me incoherent.

I think my favorite exchange in the whole story is the "I should stop you." I just love them, so much. He reminds me a bit of the Doctor when he says, "You want to see what I'll do."

I just love this so, so much and you're one of my favorite people for thinking this up and writing them.

Love!

Beth.

needs more like harry and hermione meets sarah