|Reviews for the party was ongoing|
| Jannasaur 10/9/11 . chapter 1
I watched the Kite Runner, but when I started reading the book for English class, I started to pick up this vibe between the two half-brothers, even if it may not be there. But Amir and Hassan did have a very strong bond. I wanted to write my own, Amir/Hassan fanfic, but wanted to see if anyone else had, and was glad to know that I am not the only one who likes these two together.
There was a very 'angsty' feel to your fic, considering the fact that you kept to the story, especially the fact that Amir witnessed Hassan getting raped and how he felt about it. Your fic was sweet, but I'm not too sure about the structure... Is this a poem fic? Because the way you set it out seemed so. Well anywho, I would like to see more from you. I read the sin, but didn't like it very much before I found this, and this seems sweet :)
| MidnightsPhantom 4/8/11 . chapter 1
That was very sweet I love the Kite Runner and am happy to see more fics for the section :) Keep it up.