i love ur story please continue it

Not bad and mad me lough and a great story i can't what for the next chapter

Grammar problems. A beta reader may help you with that *holds up a sign that says "Volunteer Right Here"* Also, it's spelled Eevee, not Evee, and Giovanni, not Geovanni. If you have an old Pokemon Guide Book lying around, that will help you extremely with Pokemon spellings. A few other typos hanging around. Update soon! (and if you want a Beta Reader, I'll help ya! :D)

will it sure has been a long time since u updated hasn't it? nice chatper

Note for previous review; Do you think you can make part of a later chapter, there Ash connect his PokéDex to Amy's microcomputer, so that they can trade databases and information between the two systems? You know, so that Ash can use Dexter to analyze Heart Snatchers, while Amy can use her computer as a PokéDex?

I hope you don't support Pokéshipping, since that can never be possible in official media.
But, anyway, can't you make a later chapter, there Ash turns into a new Sailor Senshi by touching the Purity Chalice and absorb some of its unlimited powers? Or maybe there Clefairy gets powered-up in some mysterious way, by touching the Chalice and absorb its power?
But, one thing is to be sure; AshxMisty = bad, Ash as a Sailor Senshi is good, but Misty as a Sailor Senshi, never a good thing.

Well happy aniversery then.
Finally you've updated, and great chapter and nice pokemon you match with every body

good job

I finallfy finish it, and hope you will write more! The parts with Brock and the scouts were priceless! I hope you don't mind if Igive you a few ideas for monster snad victims, but maybe you can use some of the new generation pokemon, or at least the second generation. And maybe use Gary for a victim. Can't wait to see what starters the scouts are getting!

Man, that was funny with Sailor Moon and Snorlax, heh he! And I like you pokemon-Heart Snatchers, they're really creative and unique!

Cool story, love the way Mimet is part of TR's motto. Chao!

I Love The Chapter:7 Plz Plz Update It Soon!

Okie doke, now to do this right. Ahem...
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! IT WAS AWESOME! UPDATE SOONISH!
Now that I got that out of the way, I'd like to point out a few things I noticed (don't hate me! I have a thing for grammar!)
First, this chapter was Dialogue driven. Could you put more detail? Also, almost every paragraph starts with "blah blah blah". There are a few exceptions, but mostly it starts with the quote. Change it up a bit?
The other comment I have is that I caught a couple grammar and spelling errors, but they were minor ones. Punctuation goes inside the quotes, etc.
Anywho, I loved the chappy and can't wait for the next one. ^_^ (don't hurt me for the comments! *bows*)

sorry about the other one my computer didn't show it for some reson i'll try and help for Lita how about Oddish cause she likes plants or Klekid for elementsl resons for Raye Grolithe, Mina Teddiursa or Eevee cause there both cuet and mina is the suposed cuet one, Amy Delibird or Jynx ice types, Darien Roselia you can tell why, thats all i got for now and the next victom Ash's mom you see how kind she is and how much she loves ash and Mr.Mime or maby that kid ash lost to in the pokemon league Richie i think was his name

I Enjoy were you have taking the story so far and can't waiet to see were you are going to go from here. I also wonder if your ganna give the scouts pokemon or not becaus that would make it more interesting.