Reviews for First Time
Chapitas1991 4/20/12 . chapter 1
aweeessoommee*:.。. o()o .。.:*
rubell 6/4/11 . chapter 1
That could insite some major mess!
Claire Bloom 4/4/11 . chapter 1
*eyes widen with shock*

With just 100 words, you wrote something sexy and with a twist. Very clever. :)

Good luck with the comp

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TheRainGirl 4/3/11 . chapter 1
Well that was just teasing!
LaLaLa81 4/1/11 . chapter 1
Lovely. Such a perfect use of so few words. Each counted perfectly.