Yay! Happy-ending! Depressing at first, murderous thoughts about Ryoga and all, but then it becomes rather sweet. Pretty.

Great, that's the only word that describes this. I'm trying to get rid of the goofy grin that's plastered on my face .

OMG. I think I'm gonna cry.

I better not, coz I'm at school in the computer lab and I would hate for someone I know to walk in and see me crying. That was just so sweet. And exactly what I've been wishing to happen for about 2 months now. I can't imagine how Akane felt after 6.

Hikari

Very good story!

*Sniff* So beutiful piku piku *sniff* Write more like this

This is amazing and very beautiful! Totally fell inlove with this story from beginning to end!

The past and present tense is somewhat confusing but tolerable. Love the waffy moment at the end.

whoa...intense... not much as WAFF...but just all of these feelings you imbue in the character...

This is a very nice idea. I would simply love to see it made into a much longer piece with more depth.

Very Nice )

Cute...I like it.

They deserve eachother.

that was sooooo good, will u add more?

say yess!

ooohhh, how sweet... I'm totally touched. Truly you are the Queen of Waff.

Very good fic. Excellent, in fact. The tenses were a little odd, but you couldn't avoid that. I hope to read more of your work in the future.

Pretty cool oneshot.