Awwwww What happened to the car? That's really sad. How'd they get separated? Who hit Dean? I have questions!

Well done! :)

Oh poor Impala, that's heartbreaking. I can just imagine Dean's despair on seeing his poor wrecked baby.

Powerful last line 'His head leaves yet another dent in the Impala's damaged exterior'

Really unusual use of the challenge word, great job x

Very accurate description of Dean's reaction to the state of his car. :) Loved the story!

Aw, wonderful and sad glimpse of a hopefully averted future. It IS from Dean's little time travel into the future after the demon virus broke out, is it. Loved that one, and the dumbstruck expression on Dean's face when he saw his black beauty devastated... Nice way to weave "cozy" in :-)

xxx Kate

dang, definitely not a nice place to leave this one. It almost makes you cry knowing the condition the Impala is in now!

I think you should continue this one my friend!

Oh Twinchy, that's sad. Poor battered Baby!

DeansBabyBird

Oh, poor poor poor Impala and Dean! He must have been crushed to see his baby like that...and then to be the cause of another dent...when he wakes up he's going to be kicking some serious ass!