Please continue. Update soon!

This seems interesting, I can't wait for the next part...I hope it comes out soon.

And yeah like yonet-chan said, Killua does seem a little OOC but it's not that noticeable, I think (probably) the only reason I noticed is because I love Killua so much.

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Keep up the good work I hope the next part is out soon

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Great chappie! Hisoka seems a little too evil, but I guess he is, so that's alright. You need to be careful because the "girl disguises herself as boy" thing is typical to Mary-Sues. Ricku is probably not one, and she isn't disguising herself, but some people might think she is. I love this story! Please continue!

Awesome story! please update it soon. i really would like to know waht happens!

In Japanese, "Ricku" is spelled Riku, and is a common name for both genders. Killua seemed a little OOC, but I assume you know what you're doing and defer to your higher authority. Nice plot bunny! It'll be fun to see where this story goes;)

So this is your first fanfiction? It's normal if it's a bit awkward at first, I know what it's like XD I'll try to write a lil con/crit, basing on my own experience, cuz my first fanfiction was... well... The heroine is a Mary-sue... an' I've improve a lot, so I regret, and I try to help beginners ... 3

I hope I won't make too many mistakes, I'm French so I'm still learning English, even though it's kinda good XD

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"But your just way out of my league" I don't understand, is "way out" an expression, or is it "you are just way out of my league?"

"I'm a GIRL! Having short hair is also common for girls!" Haha! XD That makes me laugh XD It's not common to write about girls OC looking like boys, I like the idea XD

The dialogue was so cute, but you can add more description, it will make it more .. hmm... *searches for an English adjective* lively? *dies* "

Sometimes too, you switch tenses. I like how I'm able to spot it, but unable to correct it myself XD I make that mistake too 3

Sooo, overall, it sounds like a nice story, I wanna read what happens next XD I can't really really criticize it, it was good, except for the things I spotted above. I like your writing style, it's easy ti understand, yet various and fluent 3

Good work!

PS: I might be slow at reviewing your story, don't worry, I also have to read other stories...

It was pretty good, just a little tip, you should go back and add a line between your message and the start of your story. For some people little things like that can be a turn off for a story.

And even though it's a little short I think it's really good and I can't wait for the next part to come out.

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Wow so far I love this !

I cant wait to see how she plays a later role in this!

Im actually thinking of making my own hunterxhunter fanfic, youve inspired me to start writing it