Wow.

Very Intense.

Well written.

Very nice tribute to the people of Japan. I couldn't imagine going through something like that. :(

You did a great job creating a very real scene many of us probably never think about - and hopefully will never have to experience.

Great job and good luck in the contest.

This was very poignant and well descriptive. I like how you utilised a real life tragedy into your entry, with characters we always relate too.

Good luck in the comp

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Very touching.

Omg Wow *O* Continue this after the contest :)

As soon as you can, you need to follow this story until after all the funerals & burials, finishing up when Forks is cleaned up, seeing what & who survived. This is a great first chapter, but more would be better!

Scary and sad.

WOW JUST WOW! There are no words.