"My mind is a hall of mirrors and everywhere I turn all I see is myself"

Dorothy alive in writing, how can people write so well? Is it an ability i shan't ever hold?

I love it :D I think you've captured her thoughts well, and i love the way you've written it- even if you hadn't explained the change of POV, it was written well enough to be seen.

Wow, I love dark stuff about Dorothy. She is so perfect for this kind of fic. You may have just inspired me.

Wow. That is really amazing how you could convey so much is only a few sentences.

Yeah! Scarring certain Englishing classes happens to be my mission on some occasions as well.