|Reviews for Picking Up The Pieces|
| Shadow Traveling Demi-God 4/29/13 . chapter 31
I would probably read it.
| Silver 4/25/13 . chapter 31
I would read it. How about Caine acts normal but when he sleep he does the gaiaphage's bidding . So Sam has to keep Caine safe even though Caine looks completely normal and acts normal ! So he doesn't even know anythings wrong
| Arrowkid21 4/4/13 . chapter 31
I haven't finished but I spoiled that part myself. Do it! Just as long the Gaiaphage doesn't show up. Damn monster got my favorite person killed!1
| Empty Thoughts 4/3/13 . chapter 31
I just finished Light. I can't... I'm still crying. On the inside now, though. Mostly.
I like your fic idea. (I really didn't want Caine to die. Really really.) If you were going to bring Caine back not fully whole there's two ways you could make the reason believable; one: PTSD. The times he's zoning out could be flash backs or something. (Though I'm asking if you do decide to do that to treat the subject with respect because I happen to know someone with PTSD and a lot of people who write about it generally don't realize how stressful it is.) it could also explain a lot of change in behaviour. Or two; Pete somehow messed up a few things when he was inside Caine's brain. Stepped on a few wrong wires, you know? That would make sense too.
About OC's. An important thing to remember while writing the fic is that not a lot of people actually like OC's. Keep that in mind when writing. A good plot for OC's would probably be they had siblings in the FAYZ who died. Whether or not Caine had anything to do with it, they want someone in trouble for it.
I don't think bringing Gaia in would be a good idea actually. I mean, fluffy Caine being a good dad is cute and all but does it really help with the plot?
It's been a long time since I read this story, but if I remember correctly there was a few things I was iffy about. Things that happened obviously because you wanted them to happen.
I've been known to say this before: the difference between a good author and a mediocre author is that one writes something because it has to happen and it makes sense. The other writes things they want to happen, but might not fit as well.
I think bring Gaia in would cause a lot of things that are cute and all, but don't really fit in. Damaged Caine being a good daddy? It doesn't make sense.
Anyways, I hope you liked some of my suggestions, whether you used them or not. I'm excited to see what you come up with. (I apologize for any grammar/ spelling mistakes. I'm on my iPod and prof reading is a B-I-T-C-H.)
| Guest 4/3/13 . chapter 31
omg thats such a good idea! i would love to read it, please write it! :D
| Guest 4/3/13 . chapter 31
That new idea u have is amazing id so read it plz write it!
| cainefanatic6 4/2/13 . chapter 31
i would so read that omg you're such a great writer especially when it comes to caine and sam
| Taytay 3/27/13 . chapter 1
OMG this is the best story ever! Im sorry I didnt read this sooner. I got into this series, but then I couldnt find Fear. I just finished it and I cant wait to read the next one! You're writing is driving me crazy! I read 15 yrs 2 late, and I wanted more. Then I read this. You absolutely MUST do a sequel! I love the idea of a story about how Caine adapts to living with Sam and Connie. It's probably just me, and I'm not saying this story isn't awesome, but I'm more into Connie-Caine motherly love and how they accept each other. I loved the beginning, but then I got sad when all the normal stuff ended and it turned more violent and busy. I wish it had been more about their normal life. (no offense!) I also have some questions Im DYING to get answered! Does Caine get used to his mom? Does he ever let her give him a haircut? Does he ever call her mom? This is the kinda stuff I want to read about. I'm CRAZY about Caine and Connie! (not incest) You're writing is FANTABULASTIC and I think you should make a sequel. Hope I don't offend! My motives are pure. Keep it going! You ROCK!
| cainefanatic6 2/3/13 . chapter 30
yeah, i know, sorry haha i didn't see when you made those chapters! and also, you should continue this, with a sequel, because this is my favorite gone fan fic and i feel like I'm reading the actual book when i read this! if you make a sequel and you include things from light, could you also incorporate things from plague and fear haha? but yeah, you should really continue this with a sequel because a lot of people would definitely read it and love it, especially me :D
| Thabile Mofokeng 2/2/13 . chapter 30
Wow! This story was absolutely awesome! I loved it! PLEASE make a sequel!
| cainefanatic 1/24/13 . chapter 18
could you please go a little easier on caine? :3
| cainefanatic6 1/24/13 . chapter 14
i really love this story and i keep reading because its so good and addicting haha and caine is my favorite character if you couldn't tell by the username :P the only thing i was wondering was if you could add in some details from plague and fear? like gaia (caine and diana's baby), drake/brittney (or how they could've come apart after the FAYZ), and some more things from those books? anyways this is really good, i have to keep reading now but the only thing to make this better is add stuff because nothing has to be changed :D
| Happy Days 1/12/13 . chapter 1
This fanfic is just too cute... well written too. I love your work. I've read your other stories too. I really hope you continue or finish this one! Bringing Nerezza back was quite a surprise but hey it worked. I just hope Caine or Sam won't die haha. CAINE GETS SO CUTE WHEN HE NEEDS SAM. So much praise for this fanfic :) please update soon!
| Dr.Halfheart 1/10/13 . chapter 28
WOW. I really wish that I had found this story earlier... I love it! I would've reviewed EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER. The idea of Caine having schizophrenia is so clever because it's the perfect coping method for him getting over the FAYZ because Caine really doesn't know how to deal with situations maturely. Now more than ever bevause he has lost all his power over the people. I think it's absolutely adorable whenever he switches and needs Sam, "his big brother". THAT'S JUST SO CUTE. I know this is your story but I really appreciated how well you kept them in character, especially since they had to change because the FAYZ is over. It takes talent to write a fanfiction where you make it your own yet keep the characters real. And I just love the characters you added. Most writers screw up the story by adding to many characters and changing the story too much but...NOT THIS ONE. You made everything go completely smooth. Everything just flowed. I think this fanfic is one of the best I've read.
| Arrowkid21 1/5/13 . chapter 29
So glad you updated! Can't believe this story is almost over it looked like it just got a whole lot more complicated! Update soon :)