Aw, that was really cute! I thought they both were really in character, and you did a great job with this (:

This was quite good, but I felt like some moments were just over explained. Like Dean telling Lois what they were going to do step by step to get out of the woods. Or Dean telling his back story. It just doesn't seem like he would tell anyone that much, that fast. And yeah I know you acknowledged that this was really fast, but that just made it seem less special and more like this is going really fast and that isn't like Dean.

Otherwise it was quite good for a storyline, Lois seemed in character and the story was plausible for the Supernatural world. I'd say keep going if you have plans to. I will keep reading.

I wish this story went on longer! I love it :)