Oh my wow

i dont think ive read a story that so completely graps the concept of dubious consent. The guilt, the manipulation, and the overall mind-fuck that this situation encompasses, made me really contemplative of what just happened to hermione. I think its a great take away to have from a story, good job.

Absolutely fucktastic! ;)

I loved the psychology as well as the lemon. It was intense, realistic, and Extremely well written.

Hotttt wow. More more more!

Dark and then with that twist? Evil, devious Lucius at his very best.

What a dirty old man...I love it! )

Haha every soldier knows its not a question of IF someone breaks, its a question of WHEN.

Nasty piece of work isn't he? He may havr forced her but she wasn't physically harmed (emotionally? Well that's another story) very nice. You my friend are twisted, just as well there is some darkness in me that actually doesn't mind this!

Delicious.

It certainly borders on the dark but Hermione appears torn over her willingness enough to actually enjoy it. Lucius is wonderfully done. Nice one-shot!

I love how this could be almost canon. And Hermione's Gryffindor bravery and love for Ron would totally lead her to screwing Lucius. Brilliant brilliant! Great job :)

Dub-con, indeed! As a matter of fact, I'll even argue that tag as Hermione seemed to be enjoying it a little too much lol.

You wrote Lucius so in character. It really is like him to take advantage of Hermione in more ways than the sexual, the manipulative bastard. I guess that's why we all love him so much, eh? We need some serious psychological help...

I can't say it was truly dark, and I'm sorry if that's what you were aiming for. Regardless, it was an enjoyable read with rude bits thrown in for extra pleasure (no pun intended)! Do keep up the great work!

-MizSphinx