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10th Squad 3rd Seat 9/4/11 . chapter 1
So

I always liked Nibi.
harlequin320 4/11/11 . chapter 1
wow, I'm not big on one shots myself but that was really good, its really well written, you can really feel the emotions of Yugito and Nibi as they share their last moments, well done
Echo Uchiha 4/2/11 . chapter 1
awwwwww!
Rixxell Stryfe 4/1/11 . chapter 1
Well that is a good story. It's well done and I would almost want to see how you could pull off other jinchuuriki after this.

Thanks for writing:)
Kaida Mizu 4/1/11 . chapter 1
WAAAA poor Nii POOR NII WAAAA great story do one for the 6 tails Utakata because he had a student that would mek a beautiful stry!
Dragon and Sword Master 4/1/11 . chapter 1
I don't know whether to hate you for writing something like this (since Yugito is my favorite Jinnchuriki) or praise you for writing such a tear jerker.

DASM

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Hyrulian Hero Akai 4/1/11 . chapter 1
Aw! Thats so sad... poor Nibi and Yugito... well written as usual but really sad..
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