OMGOMGOGMGOGM. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER333
A HUGG! AHHHHHHH !
Can't wait for the next chapter. and the next. please WRITE MORE SOON !

Fascinating chapter! I always love reading or talking about childbirth and this one was rather unique. I am certain I would not care to have Guthwyn at my side while I was giving birth. :) My heart breaks for Legolas though, I really want them to end up together in a love match and not a marriage of convenience with Cobryn.

Update immediately, please!

Thank you for updating! I just had to giggle at Guthwyn's naivety. I can't believe you did research and watched a video on childbirth. I would've done the same with covering my eyes. I feel queasy around blood and pain; there was an open heart surgery we had to watch in anatomy last year, I kept staring at my desk the whole period! The scene with Legolas and Guthwyn was so bittersweet. They're making progress but there's always going to be that barrier... Hope to see another update soon!

I just finished reading this chapter, so I thought I might as well review. I like the way you portray Thranduil and that you did not overdue his opinion of humans too much. I like length stories actually and I hope more is too come. Though I must admit your scaring me with the whole Cobryn/Gúthwyn thing! This is probably the most decent OOC I have read-well that word does not do this story any real justice but what I’m trying to say is that I like that it’s not cliché. This story deserves more reviews. Keep writing and good work!

I absolutely adore this story! This is the second time I've read this series, and it was just as captivating this time around. Sincerely looking forward to the next chapters!

Completely unrelated to this chapter. But I still want Elphir to see how much of a mean, mean lady his sister is and what she did to Guthwyn. To clear Guthwyn's name in his books. Then an apology!

Other than that, out of curiosity, are you ever going to broaden Erchirion's character? He is the only Dol Amroth Prince you havent exactly written about, nor given a story too.

Keep up your fantastic writing!

I need those two to kiss! Please?! It's hurting my soul! :) awesome chapter, looking for your next update!

Dammmmmnnnnn Tricksy Kings and their meddling ways I squealed horribly while reading this, I'll have you know! I hope you're feeling alright, I'm glad to be back in school at least, and this was a nice way to end my first week back :) I missed Guthwyn and your amazing writing :3

DFC

Sorry to hear that you're ill. I seem to get sick every year at the beginning of school too, and it can be terrible. [

Anyway, this was a great chapter. Guthwyn's musings on Hammel and Haiweth were interesting, and I loved the interaction between Legolas and Guthwyn at the end.

So sorry you're sick and I hope you get better soon. This was a sweet chapter. Legolas is so kind and gentle towards her that it warms your heart. I am certain that she is falling for him but has yet to realize it. Thank you for the update and I'll look forward to the next one!

Ah, amazing! Happy times! I am overjoyed to read that Guthwyn has overcome her fear of Legolas :D It's such a huuuuuge relief to see she is healing those old wounds. But now I'm worried about King Thranduil...he's up to no good and the fact that he doesn't know the real reasoning behind Guthwyn's discomfort is putting my nerves on end. No good can become of this :(

I really look forward to the next update!

XOXO

So very happy to see a new chapter, one of my favorite stories by far. I feel sad still for Guthwyn, so much inner healing needed yet but glad for her and Legolas to make some forward progress. I am still wanting her to end up with Legolas as opposed to settling for Cobryn.

Update immediately, please!

Anolinde, thank you for updating! School has started for me as well. I'm actually three weeks into college and I'm starting to get adjusted to college life. I felt this was a wonderful breakthrough chapter for Guthwyn. Also, I don't remember her breaking her ankle. When did this happen?