|Reviews for Will You be Mine Forever|
| Maggi Esk 11/30/11 . chapter 28
What the hell with Derrick he wants V living with him sure that's gonna happen firt of all Mick will say no and more important V will say NO!. I REALLY HATE THIS DERRICK.
Everything looks good for the rest I want this "war" started.
| moonjat54 11/30/11 . chapter 28
Oh this game of cat and mouse is exciting. Beth handled herself beautifully and she kept her cool. I know that Shea is suspicious and it shows that he smarter than we might have suspected. It is good to have a worthy opponent and that makes the drama even better.
It was interesting to see Cynthia show up and not be able to convince Coraline to walk out of that shed. Really shows off Vanessa's power. And poor Coraline still can't let go of her belief that Mick is not over her. She is such a slow learner...lol.
And I do like Janice and Bowden together.
It looks like this is going to get nasty soon...and I am not sure that either Shea or Elliot will try to protect Beth and Shannon, even with the information she has on them. They do worry me.
| celticgothhardy 11/30/11 . chapter 28
Beth can be very sneaky. That's awesome.
| betsal 11/30/11 . chapter 28
Great chapter! Beth did her part wonderfully. Cynthia always trying to help Coraline, I hope she doesn't sucess. Derrick's thinking about Veronica moving in with him but what is he thinking? That's not possible, is it? I hope the vampires were able to read the lips of the hunters with their plans.
| Islandergyrl 11/14/11 . chapter 27
Glad to see you have updated but the chapter was too short!
Hoping for more action in the next ones to come. :)
Geez even as an undead veronica will always attract attention everywhere lol. I just hope she realizes she and Logan belong with each other.
I would think Ian would have more sense than to hand out his number. Men! Go figure. ;D
Keep up the good work!
| celticgothhardy 11/14/11 . chapter 27
I have nothing to say except continue please!
| betsal 11/14/11 . chapter 27
Beth did her part fantastically! I hope Keith and Leo presence dissuade the hunters from taking Beth. Veronica was smart and others vampires should learn how to look tan like her.
What's Logan's idea?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| moonjat54 11/14/11 . chapter 27
The sad thing about the way Elliot and Shea operate is that while they may truly believe they are saving the world by hunting vampires...they don't really care if they save Shannon or not. She is just a way to manipulate Beth and we know they don't care that Beth could get hurt in their plans. They are worse than the monsters they hate. I am worried about what else they are plotting.
I love how Veronica got the info from that guy, she is one smart cookie and Mick should be proud of her. He may be a reluctant sire but he is training her right and she is using her head.
I enjoyed this chapter very much.
| Chalicewell 11/14/11 . chapter 27
Yea, Beth. She's got a lot of courage, although I'm glad Keith and Leo are there with her. Great answers to the interogation.
I loved the bit with Veronica, she's a smart cookie getting that phone number. I'm glad Derrick is seeing that Logan and Veronica's bond is deep.
Good chapter, very exciting!
| Maggi Esk 11/13/11 . chapter 27
What was Logan idea? I cant guess this will bother me till I know. involves Sydney and her father? Ughh! I like that this Derrick finally sees that this two being together for a long time and they will be again. I hate that guy.
I hate Derrick.
| Chalicewell 11/8/11 . chapter 26
So glad Bowden has been reunited with all his friends. Poor Mick is just on the ragged edge and I hope he doesn't do anything rash. I feel a confrontation coming...
I hope Logan can get his blood problems solved soon so he can at least spend some time with Veronica. Look forward to the next chapter!
| celticgothhardy 11/7/11 . chapter 26
Can't wait for the next part. Fantastic
| betsal 11/7/11 . chapter 26
I'm a little worried with the meeting with the hunters, they are so awful, but I hope that our boys can help Beth if necessary. I'm glad Bodwen is between friends and he is going to hear more "hush" from Janice ha ha.
| Islandergyrl 11/6/11 . chapter 26
Wow so much tension between the vamps! Mick is so touchy. Beth needs to come home soon otherwise who onows what kind of fights he will get into. Im just glad its not logan with the hothead this time. When are u gonna fix Logan and Veronica? As much of a nice guy Derrick is he just cannot stand in the way of true love. Lol.
He so reminds me of the donut and i never liked veronica with duncan.
Veronica has had her fair share of screwing with logan. She needs to give him a break. Dont get me wrong logan is no angel but rhe more i watch reruns of the show the more i remember how much she always screwed with him. I guess u know whose side i always end up with huh?
Anyway great update... Can't wait to see what happens next!
Please have more chapters with Finn and Gabriel, i just love them!
| Maggi Esk 11/6/11 . chapter 26
what is doing Mick? why I have the feeling that V will get the worst of this. I just feel like Bowden I dont know what's going on.
maybe next chapter will help me.