oh my gosh, this story is so amazing. i luv how alex is all 'i failed! NOOOO and the whole EVERYTHING! this story just roX!

Update?

Like this story a lot, keep writing. Is Alex going forth and facing fears or running and hiding from his future?

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This is good, keep it up.

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This is a completly amazing fan fic! Certainly the best post Scoria Rising out there! Admitedly I just finished the book today and have been trawling through all the AR fanfics for the spoiler full stories I couldn't read before. And this one is the only one that I have liked. What I love about it is that you manage to keep things almost relistic and Alex is perfectly in charactor. You don't have him grief riden and tramatized or overly jumpy and ready for a fight or anything like that. And yet he's still grieving for Jack in his own way. It's briliant! I just love this!

I think I kind of like monitor... He seems like an okay guy. I still feel bad for Alex, but this was a good chapter... I'm really excited to read more, so I hope you do update as soon as you can! :)

Im like in love. This fanfiction is brilliant! Your descriptions are great, you've captured Alex well and the plotline is really good too! I feel so bad for Alex... I'm glad it's Fox guiding him... Good work :)

Nice story, I like the way you tell the story.

Ooh! This story is VERY well written! And realistic too. . .

Well done!

Um, please make Alex get into the selections? I’ll still read this story if you don’t though.

Please update soon!

Wolfern

AWESOME story! I love how you make Alex more professional than the normal wacky portrayal most authors do, and how he's good, but not a mary sue. (Hey, that rhymes!) I definitely hope he passes Selection, though. I mean, the SAS is more about special forces stuff, like what Alex has done a little, and he's pretty smart and an instinctive learner, which is more than most of those idiots can say... But either way, I'm sure the story will continue to be excellent, so UPDATE SOON!

TheNotedMusician

love'n dis

this is really good, well researched (well i'm guessing it is from all the welsh place names and the detail you've put in), and i can't wait to read more!

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Amazing! I love this chapter as well. You write like Anthony Horowitz, and this makes the story seem just like a sequel that he wrote. This fic will end up being great, I'm sure.

This is a great first chapter! It's an exciting beginning for any story, but you could probably make anything interesting with your engaging writing style.

Pretty good so far. Thanks for writing!