*sigh*

sadness :(

*tear* I can't begin to tell you the many reasons why I love this. I can only say that its terribly beautiful, impressively well-written, raw, stinging, desperately painful, gorgeous, hot, sad, sexy, and deep. I loved it so much for the amazing story but am also very moved by your reasons for writing it, for the sweetness of your friendship with vampthenewblack and for your courage in writing a scary subject matter because you wanted it to be a personal gift for her. In total, its perfect. Thank you for the acknowledgment, it was an honor to read and a pleasure to nudge and hassle you about posting. Love love love! xoxo

Wow Venis. I think my eyes are like this 0.0.

I absolutely love the melancholy that flows through all the story. Each sentence is like a wave of pain and longing and it is just so beautiful!

I know you struggled a bit with th eplot, but it doesn't show at all. And believe me when i say that it was worth all your efforts. I absolutely LOVE it!

I wish we could rec' it in Vampslash!

xoxo

Seren

You know I think Edward and Jasper belong together forever, but I'm always willing to be conviced that Carlisle is his one true love. You definitely did that here. So sad. Thanks for sharing your birthday gift with the rest of us!

my emotions were pulled in every direction on this one. i like that ;) well done, enjoyed the angst!

Beautifully written! Loved the angst. There are never enough E/C stories out there for me. To vampireisthenewblack: thanks for sharing this story with us and happy belated b-day. I'm happy to know that there will be another story for her b-day next year. :)

Lovely and heartbreaking.

Damn. That was excellent. Beautifully written, and wow...the angst. Well done.

Vamp is a lucky girl to get this as a birthday present! I'm so sad for Edward, but you do make it difficult to be mad at Carlisle. This is beautifully written and you quite artfully pushed some boundaries, but it is sooooo well done! Love it!

I love this. I love you. I love that you would make the effort to write something specifically for me. I am in awe of anyone who can do that, who can bend a story to their will (god knows I have proven my fail when I try).

The erotic asphyxiation, the blood, the E/C, the tragedy... These are a few of my favourite things. Thank you thank you thank you!