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Reviews for Too Slow
boozy von chugaton 4/3/11 . chapter 1
Aww! I like it! Beautifully written! I especially liked the Athena reference. You can really show the audience what you're trying to potray.
Cruelest Sea 4/3/11 . chapter 1
Excellent and beautifully poignant.