|Reviews for Ghost in the machine|
| Wingman0 3/1/12 . chapter 2
I must say very interesting story you have going so far. I like the plot so far good story movement with out being rushed and as far as I can remember everyone's in character.
One thing I've noticed was some of the words you used didn't seem to flow well. I would say find your self a good pre-reader to help with this problem.
Other than that this story is definitely worth keeping an eye on.