|Reviews for Like a single grain of sand|
| Guest 5/3/13 . chapter 34
well too bad your not writing for this anymore, such a shame, but it was good while it lasted, even with the language barrier and Ed sounding like a retard threw the whole thing
| Trying -Helps 3/1/13 . chapter 34
It was a good story but it went on to long. It is good to have a steady build up but you can loose the crowds interest when you don't give a pay of after a chapter or three. Non withstanding the writing was pasable, I say pasable because it could still use some refining. You were mainly saved because you had interesting characterization and a good cast to work with. I hope you keep writing.
Take the good person test.
| Leonard L. Church 1/27/13 . chapter 8
I didn't even realize what shadow jutsu must look like to Ed until he did the backflip. Don't I feel stupid. Guess that makes Choji Gluttony :)
| dch448 1/22/13 . chapter 34
Well that was disappointing. I expected more. In the end you did almost nothing with the story, and killed off the only thing that would have an effect on the universe. Really hate that. Don't take this as a flame but wow I really really hate this story now. What a waste of a few hours of my life. I'm disappointed.
| Lyson 1/14/13 . chapter 25
Awesome story, just thought i'd let u know that sakura isn't taller than ed, not at 17. whether its brotherhood or first anime, even winry at 17 is taller than sakura. just saiyen. lol
| Astrothium 9/28/12 . chapter 34
It's a shame you decided to discontinue the story.. but you are the author... (kinda depressed XD)
| Guest 9/2/12 . chapter 34
HEY! I thought this was COMPLETE!
| Guest 9/2/12 . chapter 18
Just visible through the forming crack is a face. Two others shift behind her, but Not!sheka catches his frazzled focus best.
I don't think Ed's ever met a Sheka before... :3
| Guest 7/21/12 . chapter 11
What a dragWhat a botherSloth?
| hazelaar 6/4/12 . chapter 34
Well that went absolutely nowhere.
| Dying Heart Alchemist 3/29/12 . chapter 34
wait, wait, wait... Did you just end this fic? You can't just end it with him dying! BRING HIM BACK TO LIFE! I KEEL YOU IF DON'T!
| Kurama's Foxy Rose 2/11/12 . chapter 16
Who was that? It wasn't Gaara (and I somehow doubt you watch the Brazilian dub anyways) and it sure as hell wasn't Rock Lee... so what does it have to do with Ling's voice?
| Zhor 1/13/12 . chapter 34
Ninja are all evil bastards behind the prooganda. Nuff' said.
| Komi V 1/1/12 . chapter 34
Sweet story...I've never actually read or watched Naruto, but I understood what was happening pretty well anyways. Can't say for the Naruto characters since I don't know them, but Ed seemed very in character for his surroundings and the story played out really nicely. I liked the way you ended it, even though you said you'd had plans to do other things with it, too.
Didn't realize until I was almost finished I've already read one of your other stories, too, haha. You're a good writer.
Keep up the good work!
- Komi V
| redchinese 12/3/11 . chapter 34
lol- trust me- the whole reason it feels like its heading DBZ land is because of the week long wait- we're heading into the near last stretch of battles in Naruto, so its why those battles have to be bigger and stretch over more chapters. (remeber we aren't the primary demographic kishi is aiming at- he's aiming at 8-13 age range of boys who like reading manga for the fights).
if you ever read the Dragon Ball manga in volume format - you'll be surprised at how fast each fight arc goes- it feels long and boring right now- but when the fight with mandara/tobi and whoever is complied together- you'll finish reading thorough it quickly :)
its okay though- i get what your feeling- wait a couple months until the battles are more compiled and read through it- you'll know then if you want to bother with this fic anymore- personally- my fav fav naruto fma crossover is completely unfinishied- and I get the feeling it never will be- but if you're ever interested- check out 'The Truth Decays' the author had some great written fights and cool uses for Ed's alchemy. And all the characters are in character-it does go AUish on the naruto timelline- but its not really a big deal since the story never really goes near part 2 time frame. besides- reading Ed pissing the shit out of sasuke is funny XD