you have to write this story, PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE this one is my favourite so far and so internesting

I don't really find this one crappy, I really like about it is the character Erised)He seems really interestingw

Ohmygosh. I just HAVE to review this chapter.

This was just... jarring. Are Naruto and Itachi friends in this universe? What's Sasuke supposed to be then, the little brother Itachi wished he had? Is the story Itachi writes going to be exactly like in canon?

Continue it? Pretty please?

BWHAHAHAHA! I love this chapter like nothing on Earth!

0.o how in HECK are these three chapters related to chapter one !

Beyond confusing and disjoined.

I take it will make sense on the long run? If so, maybe these chapters should be a part of one big chapter?

Oh, and do not tell me that Sasuke is supposted to be a geasy-haired spy! Please!

Shall wait for next chapter.

so freakin' adorable! *raves praise*

this is so in character with little Sev and Lil and Tuney. i'm glad this isn't a one-shot.