Love this story and chapter so far! hoping to read more later!

This is good so far, but I'm a bit confused...in the first chapter (after the prologue), you had Rossi on the jet with the team...then he magically turned into Gideon. Not sure which one you mean to be there. Keep posting!

-Anna

Definitely write more. It's really really good!

1. I think Alyssa is protective of her brother. She is athletic and determined. She has many friends but she isn't like, super popular. She is probably angry or fustrated at her mom and has conflicting emotions for her dad. She is smart, but very stubborn.

2. I don't know much about Micheal yet, but I think he is creative because he has interest in art. That's really all I can come up with for now.

3. I think Alyssa's relationship with her parents is weak and getting weaker. Micheal has more trust and understanding in his parents.

4. I have no idea

This is really good, can't wait to see more!