Excellent story!

Iloved this!espeically the quatre duo part!you do quatre almost perfectly!ne, i gotta get to reviewing all the rest of your stuff.

Aaaaw, I loved it! _

hello my dearest friend!1

you did a great job! _

hope you upload your others fic! they are also great!

and you can count on me always!

well write you soon! ja-ne!

jo-cjan

o!cool May!but..._ write in spanish too, you know me, I'm not good at english, thanks for review my fic, and there is the next chapter . that's all for now, ja-ne!

p.d. sorry if I have any mistake

Congrats on your first fic. It's really good.

Thanks for sharing it.

THANK YOU!

i love fics about duo and his past, with the others in there too, full of angst and stress on the chara's...please, write more! i know that i'd read it, shinigami rules! .

Teresa-chan, aka Shinigami no miko

hey there! i dont refuse requests! anyway, its a good first fic, way better than my first...i got like, 3 reviews... anywayz, keep on goin with this, kinda interesting how it's going right now... working on a new fic (humor) by the way. read it if you want (when i post), but it might not be that good.

This is getting good. Keep going. Keep writing. _

_ me like. good work.

Nice start. It would be easier to read, though, if you put quotation marks around the spoken text. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I love fics about Duo and his past!

Ah! Write more! I just love Duo angst and secrets!

Really good story so far. I cannot wait until the next chapter. Please keep writing. I am really enjoying it. _