i love it although it is so depressing i cried alot by the way :( i love this couple so much i wish they could end up together

i love it it puts into persecutive of how thier situation is between both of them! but i would love it if they ended up together!

.,oowwwww.,. {wiping tears}

.,That is a sad ending.,{snif}

.,and really really depressing one.,

., I don't like the thought nor idea that Haibara will end killing herself., you know.,

/. It makes me feel so sad.,

.,and the way her character is very negative.,

., Oh well., that's your genre.,

.,and you really make a good job.,

.,making people sad by your story is a talent.,

.,Good Job you have here.,This a great one.,

.,keep on writing., LOVE IT!

Ai Haibara that I know will never kill herself just because she's broken heart.

She already learned her lesson after the death of her beloved sister.

Sad story.

Keep writing!

wew, finished read it, your story is good, but sad, okay so its a sad story but good, argh dont know the word,

but i think its depressing enough, dont make it more depressing haha...

well personally i prefer happy end or story that not sad or something like that, but this story is good in its own way,

anyway good work, bye