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hey 2/26/11 . chapter 10
whats up with draco and herminoe i dont like it srry
Anne-Lilian 10/23/10 . chapter 11
Hey! I love this, all the intrigue, the love triangles, the betrail... it's fabulous! update soon please!
KoreWillow 6/21/08 . chapter 11
I think enemies in Lust is cool. This story is so good! OOC but good! Um . . . Could you PLEZE make this a Hr/D. I LOVE that couple and Ron is acting so weird. UPDATE SOON!
Treehugger1427 7/28/07 . chapter 11
what's goin on with ron? is possesed or something? i don't get it!
mistkimoto 12/18/06 . chapter 11
keep the title ... wanna give me some ideas for my future fic? and you could be in if you wanted too...send me a message...
x-FuzzleMONSTER 12/1/06 . chapter 8
Horrible. Really.

Grammar is horrible, spelling is horrible.

Also, is Draco IN or OUT of the elevator?

If their beds were a few inches apart, how did she kiss him?

How did they cuddle up or whatever they were doing when Ron caught them?

If theyre so weak, how are they hugging and kissing.

Im not reading past chapter four. I cant stand it!
2legit2quit 7/14/06 . chapter 11
dude i luv ure story(by the way i finished), but i have a request please dont let harry or ginny die in suicide. Also i think u should let ron just let ginny and harry love each other and go out. And another thing,(sorry i am making complaints but i am jus helpin you improve your story), if this is gonna be M which i want it to be, you have to have, and it dreads me to say, lust, i am tryin to not say this word but S*E*X, pasion, fellings, sadly cussing, romance(duh since it is harry and ginny romance), and most importantly no plot and OOC people. and like i said earlier, i really think that it sould be hermione and ron together not hermione and malfoy.

well peace out and responde even this did not help,if it helped, or any other reason, so please responde.

ure favorite reading fan,

garrett
2legit2quit 7/14/06 . chapter 8
i have decided to start reviewing u from the point i am at, i have jus finished chap 8 in ure story. I am likeing it so far, i really hope that there is more romance between harry and ginny. Also i really really think it sould be Hermione and Ron. And it should be draco and some girl. lol. please dont do like others and make it gay. please responde and tell me if this helped, if it did not help, or watever. ok well peace out

garrett
Sonusai Destinios 5/2/06 . chapter 11
don't change it! please update asap! the new title will make the story all about Hermione and Draco! i've been hooked on this story since chapter one. again, please update asap!
Sonusai Destinios 5/2/06 . chapter 4
amazing! i've been hooked since chapter 1! please explain the poem, though please. and had malfoy left the elevator? was he still in there while all this was going on? so confused!
penofmyheart 4/27/06 . chapter 9
its really good
Blackheart-Jill 3/28/06 . chapter 11
please get harry and ginny back together like its ment to be
Blackheart-Jill 3/28/06 . chapter 7
they better not im telling you they better not break up
Blackheart-Jill 3/28/06 . chapter 6
No do not put Draco in this NO NO
Silent Squeak 12/10/05 . chapter 11
hi tina. i just spent half an hour reading this thing over again. instead of doing homework. cuz i'm bored between now and morp. yup. see you there. hi. okay. uh.

poor ron.
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