I actually feel kind of sorry for Maron. It's really sad. ): Nice story, though! :D

This was cute and sweet. I love how you marron turned him down and now itjs all coming back to her

Very nicely done! I like how you incorporate (spelling error?) a drunken Maron into the story and Eighteen's reaction to actually seeing her husbands' ex. It was drama but I couldn't help but laugh at envisioning the entire thing. Beautiful! I'm really looking forward to seeing more on these two from you, my friend. Bravo! w

Wow... That was really sweet. To see how krillin even though she hurt him, still tries to help her. Also, for a second there I though 18 was gonna kill her for being all over him.

Anyway, I loved it and I think you should write some more K18 stories. There aren't many of them out there, let alone this good ;)

ohhh.. very sad part for maron's

i like the story ;)

That was sweet...