Love it! Really love it! Please continue!

OMG yami marik ftw lol what happens next? Please update!

I'm liking this story. Lol good job it's really interesting and the plot is great!

WOW EPIC! i hope yami marik doesnt killl him not fair to ryou he be dead to if only they could get rid of him with out harming poor ryou

LOL THAT CREEPRED ME OUT EVEN THOUGH I KNOW ITS THE SPIRIT BAKURA STILL I GOT SHIVERS THRW OUT MY BODY S I DO BELIEVE IN THE SUPERNTUERAL AND CCAN ONLY IMAGEN HOW MARIK FELT WHEN HE SEEN THE WORDS SPELLED OUT MINE! XD SERIOUSLY IM CREEPED OUT NOW..

seriously I’m not sure what to think any more I’m not use to reading fic where Marik is so broken and venerable Marik would fight back witty remarks and even physically he wouldn’t give in so easily his pride wouldn’t be broken so easily either ...

Oh Marik you are gay my dear. Stil hating Bakura i think as i keep reading my hatred for him in this fic only grows stronger and WHY IN THE HELL IS MARIK SO WEAK DOES HE NOT REALIZE HOW MUCH STORNGER HE IS THAN BAKURA? I MEAN COME ON THE SPIRT IS IN RYOU BODY RYOU TINEY MARIK COULD SNAP HIM! And when did Marik become so broken so vernable what happen to the proud sociopath egyptain that the fans have come to know and love WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON I ISH SO CONFUSED AT THIS POIN... T_T

I LOVE THIS FIC! Thought i still hate Bakura but wow I hope Marik sarts taking better care of him self its a shame he let him beuitfull body writher away like that...wit that being said lol i am off to read chapter 3. :3

wow just wow...I HAVE TO SAY THIS WAS INTERESTING i hate Bakura for what he done to Marik and honestly im surprised Marik didnt put up more of a fight but one thing bothers me is are these like the abridge charcters or reguler and what time line is this this is it after battle city or what? anways good fic i seriously hope Marik doesnt end up careing for Bakura i mean who could love some one who RAPES THEM? want to kill Bakura so awfull what he did to poor Marik.

Love love love this fic :D

Oh my goodness! It's Yami Marik! I didn't think you'd include him in the story, and now I'm so excited ot see what happens! Finally, Bakura will get the beating he deserves.(Even though I love Bakura.)

Nice cliffhanger!

My gasp at the end of that chapter was almost comical...XD
Damn you're in trouble now Bakura XD
I miss Ryou already mind, he's so sweet bless him.
Can't wait until your next update!

MOREMOREMORE

Very good story!