Reviews for Abyssimal adventure!
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 19
Ohhh great chapter. Please continue!
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 17
I like Star's pov better...
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 16
All though insults made me laugh sooo loud (and its like 3am here D:). Expectually hippo.
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 15
xD I can't belive the GOD GENERALS played tag. That killed me via laughter.
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 14
Awwww Sync x Oc moment much
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 12
I just wasted... ten seconds of your life xD
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 8
Bad sync! Ohhh or do you just want a piece of your love and took her necklace
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 7
Sync! I love syncity sync. You know i wonder who star will be paired with.
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 5
I tried my hardest to not burst out laughing at the Dist moments and the phone thing (more dist though) but failed. It was halarious! I hope the rest of your chapters are like this!
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 4
Noooo the necklace! And how dare you not give Sync'y his cookies! *hugs Sync*
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 3
Nice i love this story.
Doveflight 3/13/13 . chapter 2
If that was me at the end of this chapter i would scream so loudly. I got so into this story i almost did just reading this (yeah im stupid like that) cause i put myself into the main characters pov.
DAve and Bob 1/28/13 . chapter 19
Wow, this was long. Like really long, how can you write so much in a single chapter.
brica 1/24/13 . chapter 19
This is cool. The beginning didn't make it seem like much, I'll admit, but it was worth it.

... I think I remember seeing mistakes in the story (I'm a self-proclaimed Grammar Freak)... do please find someone to correct them for you if you don't feel up to doing it yourself (I myself do that kind of work already for someone else on here *hint* *hint* ... I'm terribly obvious, aren't I?)...
TotA fan 1/8/13 . chapter 19
Hey,this fic is great
Is it over in chap 19?
If there's another chap please update soon kay? ;D
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