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Lucifer 4/9/12 . chapter 2
Awesome story! Cant wait for more plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!
reiqa00 8/15/11 . chapter 16
Great chapter! :}
Basher 8/14/11 . chapter 16
Ino is REALLY stupid! That because she never, EVER learns to look at people, mostly men on the inside! Including when it comes to Naruto! It's no wonder that she'll never gets married all beacuse she is shallow, vain and a pathetic excuse of a blond! In fact, Ino will fuck up big time when she finds out about his heritage as the Fourth's son, not to mention he become EXTREMELY handsome in years! If Ino takes her time to get to know Naruto, THEN she wouldn't say these things.

Then again, she DOESN'T deserve to have some one like Naruto and end up being alone, while Shikamaru and Choji find someone to love!

That is alll I got to say about this issue!

Later

P.S.: This chapter has not catch my interest; therefore, I am a Naru/Ino fan and I am very displeased.
Jozern 8/8/11 . chapter 19
Nice, I can just imagine it; the fiery tempered Sakura being a calm housewife XD awesome )
sweetyakane 8/8/11 . chapter 19
Aww, that was very sweet! :) I loved how ambitious Sakura was to someday match Naruto's cooking skills ;)

About the picture:

Naruto says: "Ittekuruttebayo!" Which is Naruto's typical "ttebayo" after "Ittekuru" meaning "I'm off!". It actually translates to "I'm going and coming back" ("iku" is 'to go' and "kuru" means 'to come'). You'll often hear "Ittekimasu" as the more formal form.

Sakura answers to that: "Hai, hai. Itterasshai" "Yes, yes. Bye, see you later/Bye, have fun." (again "iku" plus "irassharu" - the polite form of "kuru". "irasshai" should be the imperative form of the verb... ;) But it's Bungo (old Japanese), I guess, so I'd have to look it up to be a 100% sure. ;) In formal Japanese you'll hear "irasshi" whenever you enter a shop. It basically means "Welcome!")

Anyway: "Ittekimasu/Ittekuru" (said by one who leaves) and "Itterasshai" are a pair and stock phrase just like "Tadaima" (I'm home) and "Okaeri (nasai)" (welcome home/back) are.

Hope, I could help you a bit ;)

Again, nice chapter!

Looking forward to reading more
Nutt Man 117 8/7/11 . chapter 19
:P Poor Sakura and her cooking.

I'm sure she will get better eventually. She's gotta cook sometime for Naruto after all when they are a family.

Thanks :D
Lrd 8/7/11 . chapter 4
hey, just so you know "sakura no konoha" would mean Sakura's Konoha. in Japanese, the posessor comes first. "Konoha no Sakura" would be Konoha's Sakura, or Sakura of Konoha. it's the same with jutsu names, "Gokakyu no jutsu" art of the fireball
charles cdv 8/7/11 . chapter 19
Nice chapter
Elsil 7/30/11 . chapter 18
I am enjoying your short stories. They are nice and entertaining, and I always love to find a good NaruSaku author. Keep up the good work!

Elsil
Nutt Man 117 7/30/11 . chapter 18
Loved that last line. Sakura usually does reflect on Naruto when her moment is over.

Thanks :D
Jozern 7/27/11 . chapter 18
Lulz poor Sai Xd. A well written and a good chapter once again. Lookign forward for more.
charles cdv 7/26/11 . chapter 18
GOOD CHAPTER!
nakenochny 7/26/11 . chapter 15
I feel like you always do a pretty good job deciphering the emotions between the three of them, and I really loved the analogy you used in the end, it's perfect, really.

And still, Sasuke. Hah.

I'm definitely going to have to finish this tomorrow, my reviews are starting to get pretty crappy. XD
nakenochny 7/26/11 . chapter 14
Long one is long. And Sasuke! XD So many possibilities. Ahah.

I enjoyed the liberties you took with this one, honestly. It works well and it shows sides that you don't necessarily see. It's also much more innocent than some people tend to be when looking for the right person for them, if you know what I mean. Ahem...

The kiss was great! And the train of thought is so natural, and it just makes me... 3333 (I hope that shows up right, if not, just imagine that's a less than sign, pls)
nakenochny 7/26/11 . chapter 13
Nice lesson in physics there. I don't think the quality suffered in this one or anything, I think it's all a matter of mood or how you feel. This one's a little more abrupt and it moves faster, but you get the same amount of detail, and the abruptness works out well considering they rarely see each other and they're in the middle of a war. So yeah, it works. :)

I didn't really think about the whole thing with Sakura as a potential kidnapping until now, but you make a good point there. Or I missed something. Hm...

Yay for skipping out on responsibility to catch up. :D

And for 'clueless' comments.
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