Lance as in elite four Lance?

Dragon master?

Same guy that met up with them at the Lake of Rage. (if canon was like the game)

Oh come on hurry up continue the story please

Wow. That was good - no one thinks about Ash coming from an abusive family. Very powerful ideas, I loved the format of the blending of song and memories. . Keep it up!

Kool story I didn't know it was Lance that was brilliant go ***Ash beat your Dad!***

Well neway I may be wrong but was that evil man who laughed with sharp teeth Giovanni?

Keep up the Good work

HappyHippo

*sniff* Marvolous. I always wondered what happened to Ash's father. Plus you added in oneof the reatist songs ever! I salute you!*salutes*

Great *s*

good job...sorry there isnt much else for me to say other than I can relate to what this story's about n all which is why I like this so much

wow i didnt expect that to happen. i REALLY didn't expect ash's father to be lance. but still, its good maybe you should write about the battle between Ash and his father at the pkmn league competition that would be really cool

Please, please do a sequel to this story. I want to know how the match turns out

O_O! GYAAAAAAAA! THAT WAS BEAU-TI-FAL! PLEASE! MAKE A SEQUAL! ::Cries:: that was so sad...WAAAAAH

That was great! It was so sad. I can't help but think what would have happened next, though I understand you're not going to write another chapter. Anyway, good job, I enjoyed it.

sooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool! (and very happy you didn't use the Giovanni idea), Heya Thanks for the tippy on ! *.*

whoa, freakiness...this is good though, pika

I liked it. Keep up the good work

I luv this song and this story! Keep up the good work Pika. Make a sequel with Polkamon by Weird Al!lol. Keep it up this is great!