Holy shite, that was excellent! I don't know whatelse to say because I'm still shivering. YUM! Oh and THANK YOU!

Its always nice finding a good carlisle/edward story. I enjoyed this so much :)

Beautiful!

Awww... So glad Carlisle had the courage to be true to himself, and that Edward was there to patiently guide him through it all

what a fantastic story! I love it. I love how different Carlisle is in this and how many layers there are to his character. He's so conflicted and vulnerable. I love that Edward manages to break through.

the bit with Rose and Tanya made me lol!

I also loved the hotness (obviously), but especially this line:

"He has fever-red cheeks and slut-pink lips, and it has the effect of making his eyes seem even greener."

oh my :)

This was a fantastic, brilliant story. I do feel that you should have made a story with different names. None of the characters were similar to the twilight characters, but the story was amazing. If you change the name I think you should get this published. It is very good and very detailed. I like the very vague ending as well. It went well with the rest of the story.

This was a good story. I loved the way it ended the way it began, but with his life changing for the better. Thanks for this!

Love it! I can see why you won!

LOL AWESOME!

I don't often re-read stories but I loved this one so much in the contest that I had to when I saw it posted again.

These guys are so sweet and Carlisle is so naive. It's nice to see the confused guy end up with what's right and good at the end of the story.

It would seem this could easily be a multi-chapter story so we could see in depth how they both end up with all the marbles.

I'm tempted to give it a 9 out of 10. Simply because I'm not religious by any means, I'm atheist; so all that holy talk makes me uncomfortable.

I just hate how things like homosexuality and incest are frowned upon when... in the bible, didn't Eve have two sons? That means...

You know...

Anyhoo, great story. Despite my beliefs [or lack there of] I envy people who can have such faith in life. Like a prayer could help make things better...

Great paring, great idea for a plot, great sexy times... Great everything :]

Lovely!

This is the first Carlward story I've read, and I absolutely loved it. The way that you made everything flow together was wonderful, and you definitely have a way with words. Well done!

I usually don't do slash (because sometimes it begets me that Edward's gay) but this was freaking hot AND GOOD. it had a great story-line. I even favorited it!

I'm a straight married lady, but I gotta say that was amazing. Dirty yet strangely amousing. But so touching and sweet I almost cried at the end. Thank you for showing a love story of this nature. I found it beautiful and sexy.