|Reviews for Torn|
| edwards-girl-4-ever 9/18/11 . chapter 14
Can't wait for the epi
| sexymama25 9/18/11 . chapter 14
Update as soon as possible can't wait for the next chapter
| sandraev1 9/17/11 . chapter 14
I love how Bella is so protective of Edward and takes care of him. They're going to make it. Thanks
| LordXeenTheGreat 9/17/11 . chapter 1
| jansails 9/17/11 . chapter 14
Bella's newborn protection phase, her determination, her compulsion to see Edward safe, to do everything, to be everything for him was intensely felt.
Edward's awakening to realize Bella had claimed him completely, providing for him, both humbled & excited him as mates.
Hearing Bella's inner voice when they were in throes of passion ignited utter joy within Edward.
| itlnbrt 9/17/11 . chapter 14
Thank you so much for the update. Loved it!
| kroseph 9/17/11 . chapter 14
Fantastic! Death certainly becomes her and him. So great to get this update ;)
Congrats on your publication!
Look forward to the epilogue...
Thanks so much!
| Navarre 9/17/11 . chapter 14
Was he able to hear her thoughts because of the injury and because they are so connected as mates?
Either way, enjoyed the chapter.
| Spamula69 8/18/11 . chapter 13
my memory is bad so you must update quickly or else I have to start all over.
Please let there be more lovin.
| Spamula69 8/17/11 . chapter 5
I am loving this so far, good job!
| Fates-Love-Queen 8/17/11 . chapter 3
Oh my god. He CHANGED her? WHY did Alice not SEE this?
I completely agree with you about the Canon. Not to mention that, before this - in Twilight - Edward had not told Bella what it was like as a newborn. He didn't really explain the vampire world.
She knew his family fed from animals but, was that it?
He didn't really open up until NM I think...
Loved this chapter but I'm left wondering, where is James? Has he left her? Or is he coming back? *shudders*
I hope Edward can find her... *fingers crossed*
| Fates-Love-Queen 8/17/11 . chapter 2
Thank God that SOMEONE ran with this idea, and more importantly, that someone did it RIGHT.
This is exactly what I imagined would happen and, though it is hard reading the pain and wrath that Edward is experiencing, it needs to be done.
Mate for a mate :(
| Luvtwismut 8/16/11 . chapter 13
Oh how the tables have turned! I'm still supa siked for this amazing fic! I'll wait forever for ya! Good luck on your novel. You go girl!
| kroseph 8/15/11 . chapter 13
I just love your spin on the story. For the Volturi to come to their house to take Bella was like a nightmare-holy crap. You surprise me every time. Here I'm thinking Edward and Bella will get down and dirty and reside in bliss. Nope! That certainly didn't happen. I squelched a scream when they tore off Edward's arm? No! He has to be perfect. The agony. ;)
Can it be attached? I sound a bit silly but you've woven a lot of angsty parts in this fic and I love them all, truly. It's exciting and the anticipation of what's to come is huge and it's all been so unexpected.
Great update, thanks for the jolt.
| jansails 8/15/11 . chapter 13
Just when ExB start making progress with one another, in rides the Volturi, ever ready to wreak mayhem.
Bella's gift comes in handy.