Love it, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

wow i love this

Aw it's over? That was an awesome story I love the Japanese versions of the 'Grudge' way better then the American versions. This was very well written kudos to you :D

*shudders* I think i'm even more freaked out by dolls than before XD Yeah I have a fear of dolls...great chapter though!

Not bad :) it's nice to see more Grudge stories up and they're always a thrill to read! I like how you introduce Naoko because most people don't even know Kayako had a sister, of course since this is my favorite movie trilogy I would memorize the whole script if I had time to... All in all, a good read! I'll definetely keep reading!

Not bad a few grammar mistakes like I should be captalized as well as the word in the beginning of the sentance like 'good times.' Should be "Good times." With two parenthesis. But this is really great hun keep up the good work Sorry if I sounded kinda naggy.