Before I go on re reading your story, I must say that your picture of Delita is almost lifelike. Its s proven fact that to much sexual activity drives one mad and addicts them. Again, very well done story.

I wanted to do what your doing now forever, but just cant. Your one of the few people who can make a good story containing more then two FF games at a time. And how long are you going to punish that poor guy who yell when you make a mistake? Hasn't he died enough already?

I like you storys for FF Tactics, but I think it was a bit much with Delita.

Made by Teepelio, sure. *Coughs* Vandal Hearts *coughs.* I ddidn't think you played that game so it had to be someone else so oh well. G2G. Howcome you're not updtaing your yugioh story with Rad *curses* oh weell

Excellent story Please do a sequal of some sort if you can.

Very nice Very nice. :) I enjoyed it.

It ended! NO! I will reread this cuz I love it.

write another in this series and give Rad, Alicia, and Lavian new jobs to replace squire like say:

rad- dark knight

alicia- blue mage

lavian- assassin

A great ending to a great fic. I'm glad to see that you incorperated some of my ideas into the story. Catch you later in Chrono Palooza!

Ghaleon

DELITA YOU #$ *(&!

Ramza: O.O Colorful language.

Delita: O_O Meeble.

Sheepi: DIE! *grabs Ramza's arm and starts beating Delita with it*

Delita: X.x

Ramza: O_o I.I kinda need that.

Sheepi: WELL SO DO I! *continues beating Delita with Ramza's arm*

Ramza: O_O

Sheepi: *hands Ramza back his arm* All done! _

Ramza: O_O

Ahehe.; I'm just gonna go read the last few day?

LilSheepi

great chapter! so happy delita's gone. do you plan on doing an epilouge?

Like the Ghostbusters reference. That's one of the best parts about this fic: all the subtle refrences to just random things. I mean, a lot of 'em a lot of people I'm sure don't even get. How many people got the Clerks cartoon show refernce? I know I only did because I just watched that episode.

dude you are leaving me hanging here! FINISH IT! FINISH IT!

delitas dead! yay! i hoe ramza decides to keep him that way after he kicks ajoras ass!

So long Everhart. You didn't see until the end...