Hmmm. So it was sudden inspiration that struck you? That's interesting. And it goes well with the chatacters' situation. 3

On an adventure to read all your HP fics.

Hm...very nice poetry. The words really flowed nicely; great job!

Great poem - well written and rhymed. (sp?) Incidently, do you believe he's innocent, or is this just completely random?

SilverKestrel

This is a very good poem.

Nice - very moving and a good insight. I liked it! I love Sev . . .

Wow, i like it. Kinda haunting, kinda dark. I know exactly what u mean when u just get these lines that start popping into you head and u just wirte them down.

I usually write on the scool desks with an expo marker so i can erase stupid stuff and copy down the

im about to start on the journey of trying to read all of you Harry potter fics... seems pretty daunting from here!

kool

Not bad, I like it.

Hey, I really liked this! :-)

Cool! I was never very good a poems, but i really liked that, great job _

this poem is great

This was a great poem!

I really liked it! very deep. so sad... great! _

O... Me likes! Nice to read something like this about Sev. _

Nice poem...I especially like "Dark serpent from lighted cage"! )