   Innocent as a School Girl 1/26/07 . chapter 1Okay you spelled Victor wrong but it is still am awsome begining! Yaye you!LOL. Keep writin! |
| Linean 5/15/05 . chapter 4 YES! Even though, I'm reading this when there's more chapters to be read, I thought I would congrad' you for an awsome story so far! All you need is for Ron to be catching on to how Harry likes Hermione. That's it! If this isn't finished, please finish it, its awsome!
Linean |
| Holly Smith 2/21/04 . chapter 9 That is such a good story so far! I think that you should continue writing, even though it has been several years since you wrote in this story. But I think that it is a really good story so far. I want to know what happens, so please continue writing!
Holly |
| darktriksta 5/13/03 . chapter 1 this is used to much sry but get something original im kinda sick of finding tons of things that are pretty much clones of other storys |
| libertygrl413 5/11/02 . chapter 9 good story so far. keep going with it. ill be back...
libertygrl413
ps- check out my fic if u ever have some time. its my first and i need some comments... |
| Vagrantshadow 5/10/02 . chapter 4 yes continue your doing a great job |
| The Watcher 5/10/02 . chapter 9 Hi firstly I want to say that while this isn't one of the best Harry Potter stories I have read, It's still a good story and it's really hard for most people to write as well as the top authors on like 'Nappa' or 'E. C. R. Potter.'
I don't want you to take this the wrong way but their are a lot of little errors in this story.
For Example their are Centaurs in the forest not Minotaurs.
Harry was given the Firebolt in 3rd Year because the Womping Willow destroyed his Nimbus when he fell off the broom in the game against Hufflepuff.
What I suggest that you do is keep writing the story while having someone Beta Read for you to help spot little errors like that so that you can correct them or find a way to work around them.
Despite all of what I have said Please Keep up with your writing I don't review stories to put people off writing but rather to try and help them improve their quality of writing. |
| Anie 4/30/02 . chapter 8 ohhhhhhhhhh, write more, this is good! |
| ffff 4/28/02 . chapter 4 VVVVVVVVVVVVVOOOOOOTTTTTTEEEE NNNNNNNOOOOOOOTTTTTT |
| Romance Lover2 4/13/02 . chapter 7 AHHHHHH!I'm dying! The only thing that can save me is if you write more! PLEASE HELP! |
| Squeejum 4/10/02 . chapter 7 WRITE!WRITE,WRITE,WRITE! luv it |
| Cloud 4/9/02 . chapter 7 keep goin! I wanna see what happens! |
| Cloud 4/7/02 . chapter 7 it good |
| Cloud 4/3/02 . chapter 4 Yours is the only clean harry and Hermione story Ican find PLEASE KEEP IT UP! |
| ponder 4/3/02 . chapter 4 you had better continue this story you little... |
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