That was a great story keep up the good work man

It's pretty good so far. Keep going, it's got potential.

I do have one small problem though. I'm assuming you've played the games and read the novels.

My problem is Hansen asking Fisher if he should engage the hostiles. He wouldn't have needed to ask because Fisher would've gave him Fifth Freedom. The freedom to kill whoever and whenever. It's what sets them apart from other government agencies. No red tape.

Just thought I'd let you know, mate. But like I said it's pretty sweet.