Short, but i like

Hmm...okay. I think that what you have here, albeit extremely short, is good. *nod* It's in-character and quite touching...but, ne, there's so much more you could put here! It doesn't have to be terribly long, but you could add in sooooooo many details. What Nuriko sees, what he feels, etc. etc. etc. I love the thoughts, but...there's just so much else you could do. And, ne! There is still time to do it! I belieeeeeeve in you! *cheers*

Anyway. Best of luck. _. Jaaa!

I'm not pathetic I'm just once again having technical difficulties so I'm seeing if doing this will fix. Anyway, who ever has and will review thank you.

THE SHINODA LOVER IS BACK! short, but ok i guess. that's all.

Shady