Brilliant. I love Ochoa/Adams. Wish this was canon, though; Adams has such a depth to her that you've really captured here - love the conflict between her tough cop mentality and the realities of motherhood - though I'd hate to be the guy who ever tried to date little Sofia. Well done; more please?

Oh, that was a perfect ending. I love this part the most"This is all your fault, mister, let me get a little bit deeper." PURE GENIUS:)

That was fantastic. Great job:)

Glad Sammy set her straight.

That was a awesome start. I love these two characters.

nice start! great writing, keep it up!

Yea! Finally a story about Lydia. Very nice writing, the story is great and you were able to keep the chacters true to their personalite. Can't wait for more.