silly, loved it.

Wait, so it was Edward who was stripping? Not a woman?

Wow, that threw me at the end, I was expecting it to be Bella or Rosalie.

I felt really sorry for them when things kept going wrong. The wig caugh, nails broke, they fell over. Oh gosh. But despite that, which made it funny, it was really sweet too. I loved the fact that it was their crush, and then the misunderstanding with Esme calling out. LOL!

Great job!

Loved it hunni! Can't believe I haven't read it before. Well written and brill as usual. Top calibrate!

Mmah!

ha ha, I truly wasn't expecting that.

ROFLMFAO! That was...no words! I love you Claire. I laughed so hard at E's misfortune and the END? Priceless!

xoxx

Zen

:O I fail so hard at life! How did I not review this!

Anyway, now that I've made you a pretty awesome banner, here's my review :)

Um, I loved this, a lot. You're very sneaky in the beginning with your ambiguity toward who it is. I knew you were doing slash beforehand, though, so I suspected it was Edward :P But to an outsider, you were very clever, and I love when a story takes you by surprise. It's great.

I LOL'd pretty hard when the guy in the elevator made the turkey dinner comment. It was hilarious and gave me a visual I REALLLY didn't want, rofl.

My other favourite part is when Edward bails against the door and pretends like he's trying to be sexy *stifles laughter* He's too adorable. Then, of course, the end part...it made me chuckle. Carlisle saying Esme was nice but Edward was more his type.

Ah, I love when it works out in the end :)

Awesome entry, babe! Loved it

LOL!

Oh my, this was great. I was smiling and cringing at the same time. I mean, anything that could go wrong did, and then it all went right :)

And this is new: Edward/Esme, one and the same. Nice. I like it.

I knew it was Edward!

The green meets blue.

Edward ans Carlisle, I actually have no problem with that.

They're both hot.

Do you have a picture of what you imagined he was wearing?

Loved the story! )

haha I loved it. Poor Edward. Everything that could go wrong on that strip show did.. But Carlisle still loved him anyway! And I love that this was a Carlisle/Edward story. At first I was hoping for Carlisle/Bella. But then I read green eyes. And then was going to be disappointed if it were Carlisle/Esme lol So had planned to pretend Esme was Bella. Though somewhere in there I wondered if it could be Edward - probably at the green eyes. Well, Edward definitely works for me :P So that's awesome haha Also, love the outfit he had to wear LOL Very interesting ;) Great job!

Oh Claire.. I could hump your leg like a horny schnauzer!

that was GREAT...

funny, cute, cringeworthy and aaaaaahhhh at the end!

Well worth the wait and thanks for being a pinch!

Love you HARD!

Deb!

Sooooooooooo good, really funny! Loved the ending!

hahah! I had Bella pictured the whole way through! well done with that ending hun. Loved it! xx Lisa.

Thats was a good one! Loved it!

CC

Very cute! :D This was funny, I loved it. :D You did a good job and I loved not knowing until the end who the stripper was. I always love that element of surprise in stories. :D Nice job. :)