I love it and all but why did you have to make so short?

It's good but Amy and Dan would never keep the serum and there is this one line that I think was sentenced wrong "I fingured it..." I almost dropped my iPod reading it

Good story, but slightly shallow. Amy is more of a scaredy-cat and it's not like her to think vegencance, even if people hurt her a lot. Anyway, the serum...is not the best thing to drink. Yeah, you don't wanna drink the stinkin' serum. You'll rule the world alright. And then in ten seconds, you'll be d-woah! To much info. Read Vespers Rising, best book ever!