Aww, I adore Dart and Shana. I hope you write another fic on them...

I must say that I agree with you on the fact that Dart can be really, REALLY thick. And I insist that your fic really gives your audience an insight to Shana's emotions. I wish people that are Shana-bashers would just read this, because I'm sure most of them would have experienced that kind of longing at one point or another in their lives and might understand Shana better. I applaud(forgive me if that is spelled wrong)your talent for displaying emotion.

(*wow!*) That fanfic was great! I just realized that you wrote it a year ago...why'd you stop? It was coming out great! Well, I hope you continue it...

Well, Here is my rating:

9/10}For Story line

8.5/10}For Romance

8.75/10} Overall

Great Job!

- Shana TLoD

You're fic was kinda depressing. I think you should make a chapter for just before the ball at ht ecastle in Fletz.

Well done, Crimson Godess! It's very difficult to magnify any emotions in a scene such as this, and from what I had remembered of the game, this scene was quite boring. However, with your delicate touch, you've turned it into a wonderful drama of highs and lows that makes quite a lot of sense. Well done!

o plzzzzz put more chapters up, plzzzzzzzzz.

great story so far. um, r u going 2 put any chapters on this? plzzzzzz say yes.

om my gosh! you should write more stuff!

I liked it very much. I like Shana, and you did a good job dipicting her

PLeaes continue! Pretty please? I wanna know when Dart realizes his feelings for her!

WOW!all i can say is WWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW!that as really good, well written, nicely portrayed...all that jazz. i really enjoyed reading it.

Oh, my. Really, REALLY great! I loved it! Please write some more, mabye something like this, but Dart's thoughts about Rose and who she is... (If you got to disk 4 you know what I mean!)

Well characterized! This was good! I feel sorry for the poor girl sometimes...

Shana: Oh, I loved it! You knew exactly how I felt and what was on my head at that time! You are a genius! Five stars!

* * * * * Stars! :) _

Yoru and Miranda: 0.o Ummmm...okay.

Yoru: _;; alright! five stars.

* * * * * Stars.

OH I like this! My first fic was about Shana too, lol! She seems to be an easy target for people to relate to through fanfics. This is a really good story, I like short POV pieces like this, very well done! Great job for your first fic, keep writing!