 Lady Lan 4/11/11 . chapter 1Considering this was a drabble with a plot, I think you were plenty verbose. I love the bit about Mrs. Brief's memory (she's a dear!) and how it tied in with the B/V plot. Also, I adored the symmetry with Bulma's ribbon and Vegeta's bandage. It also served to highlight their similarities in personality. That painted a lovely image. You have such a way with words! Consider me impressed. :)
Beautiful story. Can't wait to read more from you soon! |