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| Gothicthundra 2007-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseThat was cute, I wonder if he'll write about that closet issue/ anyway that rocked. |
| Jess 2005-12-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! hahah that was completely amazing! i loved how vegeta described the sales! :P im gna check wat else uve written now :P |
| tehMimo 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseAHAHAHA! That was hilarious, I didn't actually laugh out loud, but my smile was wide throughout the whole 1839 words! Hehe |
| Bubbles the All-Powerful 2005-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAw...What a sweet little ending... Trunks in closet >drol |
| Nebel Engel 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abusegood story, i really liked it, it was hilarious! |
| Garowyn 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseLOL This was hilarious! |
| Aphiopsyduck 2004-04-23 ch 1, | abuse*ROFL* Loved it! Interesting afternoon between those two... Too bad Vegeta was found... :o) |
| Cannibal King 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseIt was bloody...yeah women do shop like devils cept for me cause I hate to shop and try on clothes and carry around the bags of stuff and sit there bored out of my mind when my mom finds a store full of stuff that she likes but is really stupid and then she says we'll leave in a minute but we really leave in two hours and my feet hurt and my arm hurts cause while she's ooking around I have to carry all the bags cause she has to push the cart and...I'm sorry for telling you about my horror life. I really like the story! It was funny^.~ |
| Chipolata 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseFunny and sweet. But 80% off? Is that store CRAZY?!? |
| Rissa of the Saiya-Jin 2003-02-02 ch 1, | abuse^_^ I mighta known. After all, the boy does grow up to be Mirai, A.K.A 'hero-worshipper' - incidentally, does anybody know WHY Mirai worships Kakarotto? I mean, yes, Vegeta's his father so he respects him, but why Kakarotto as well? All Kakarotto ever did in his timeline was die!! |
| ChInG 2002-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseGReat!!!!!!!!! lol soooooo kawaii!!!! |
| Saikono 2002-10-21 ch 1, | abusehehe funneh! um...yea....that's basically all I have to say! Ja Ne! |
| EmRyS Bellanes 2002-10-05 ch 1, | abuse^_^ hehe, that was very funny!! And that was really sweet how at the end Trunks wrote about Vegeta as the person he admired the most!! ~Emrys~ |
| Catgirl_13 2002-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is so cool! It was so funny how Veggie described the 80% off war. "Yes only luck kept us alive." Poor Vegeta. Don't blame him, 80%off would be verry, *verry* scarey!! I believe it was the bloodiest battle he's been in. This is really great!!! |
| Chibi Vegeta Girl 2002-08-18 ch 1, | abuselol i really liked this chappie pls write more hehehe Veggie goin shopping lol i can just picture it.. well it would be good having him around to carry things and to fight off crazy ladies that bother me ^^ ya i think i'll take to shopping veggie lets go! Vegeta: get away from me baka onna! *drags Veggie to the mall* yay! Vegeta:help me! |