Its nice to see that some other author picked up on the immortality inherent in Keiichi's wish!

Isn't this similar to "Guard the Future"?

MIke

This will be my last review for this story since someone seems to be trying to spam through me. I just got a notice. In case something happens, let me just say that it is not my fault. Anyways, PLEASE CONTINUE!

Mars as in Hermes or Aphropite? I forgot which.

pervert

Are you basing this character off you?

I am trying to read all OMG fics that remotely appeals to me right now well I am trying to open my Ipod out of the box...which isn't going too well. lets see where this goes.

Well, this is a very good story and I hope you will not stop there. I am waiting for the next chapters.

Good story, I hope to see more soon.

this apears to be a verry thoght out story and at the same time one that i cant wate to read more of. you have come up with an idea that iv never thought of or red about (iv read most of the oh my goddess fanfictions), and i realy cant wait to sea were this is going
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logan

WA-HO!
More of the story!
I've been eagerly anticipating this update.
You haven't dissapointed either.
VERY WELL DONE!
(though more is always appreciated)...
Had to tease just a little.
Good work.
Derek The Rogue

I really enjoyed this story. I would appreciate it, if you could continue it. Yet to see the romance D

this is very cool! continue!

This is a good story,you should continue.:)

While this fanfic screams of an 'avatar' style self-insertion fic, it's actually rather interesting. It started off very good, the idea of Skuld being given her own wish and wishing for a companion to "help her with debugging" is a good one. After that, this fic quickly became a story that revolved around the new character. No matter how interesting a new character you create, I can't stress enough that you should avoid the temptation to make the story all about the new guy. When adding a new character it is important to use the new character to complement the existing ones.

hmm.. original.. _ very nice story but you may want to check for spelling mistakes. I saw a few "though"s spelt as "tough".